10/22/2008 9:56 pm
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Like the vastness of an ocean, the gulf . . .
But as a gentle breeze skittering across
Your love comes to me on buoyant wings of illusion!
A smooth stone skipping the water
This heart I throw back!
As it loses momentum, and sinks . . .
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1 post 11/19/2008 8:15 am |
Oh Yes, I agree to that saying especially when one just fall in love! Kudos for such a nice poem!
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2 posts 1/1/2009 2:37 am |
Thank you for your comment! I love to share my poetry with others! This poem is about the promise of love, and how reality always seems to intrude and keep that promise from being fulfilled!
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